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Wednesday, 10 June 2015

Commenting

Today we had to comment on people's work...


Hi Nate,
Great Work! I like it, did you show it to your teacher?
Also how long did it take to make it? It looks like you chucked it together in 5 minutes...
From Bastion.

Friday, 5 June 2015

The Very Best of Friends Retell!

 Once… OK, We need to use something else! On a farm there were many animals, cattle, chickens, horses and dogs, Heaps of them, but there was another animal, a cat. All these animals lived with a man and women by the names Jessica and James. James loved the cat, (Whose name was William) Jessica tried to show the cat the she loved him, but it didn't work. The cat knew that Jessica did not love him. William helped James on the farm, and stayed on the truck then Boss the Bull came around! But one day, James died, Jessica was very sad, she was so sad she kicked William out of the house. William started trying to get back in. After a while he stopped and slept on hay bales all day, during the night he became very mean. One day while Jessie was putting leftovers into the cat’s bowl. The cat hissed at her and… scratched her. “Ouch!!” Jessie yelled “What was what for”. Jessie looked at William, William had become a wild cat, a torn ear, a bald patch of fur. He was not James’s cat anymore. Jessie left the door wide open and fixed her hand then she did three things. First of all she unbolted the flap, then see brought in the cat’s two bowls and last of all she got his basket and put it near the fire, “I’m sorry I’ve been so mean to you” Jessie apologized “Do you want to be the very best of friends?” William said no. Jessie brang William into the house. And they were the very best of friends. If you want to read the whole story, read “The Very Best of Friends” By Margaret Wild and Julie Vivas


This is a retell of a story!